He opened the door and stepped aside, allowing her to cross the threshold.
You’re late. Testing me, are you?
Why am I here?
This is what you want. This is what you need. And you know it.
What have you done to me?
I’ve done nothing but allow you to be you.
You’ve freed me?
You’re free. Everything you are, from the surface to your core, is free.
She covered her face with her hands, weeping silently into them.
Why do you weep?
I’ve never been free.
Pulling her hands from her face, he firmly spoke, Get used to it.
Yeah. Get used to it…. 😉
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Hahaha! Oi! 🙂
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😉
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Love this more than I can say❤️
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Thank you, Rita ❤
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Great to hear that something very positive is going on in your life, Steph!
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Hey, this was tagged “fiction” buddy…
I dunno what you’re talking about. 😉
I mean. THANK YOU!
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haha! I think I can see a something developing here…. 😀
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Methinks
That what youthinks
Is maybe ontomethinks
I’m being silly. But yeah. Ha! 😀
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Yes, I’m onto you! lol
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Hahaha!
That sounds so perverted.
I think my mind needs a good scrubbing.
Or not. It’s more fun this way. 😀
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Haha! I should’ve chosen my words more carefully. But, please, no scrubbing that mind! It’s more fun this way. 😉
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Heh. I can misread just about anything with this mind. 😉
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I like to consider it an alternative explanation. 😀
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I like that interpretation! And I’m all about alternatives. 😀
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Then we shall get along famously! 🙂
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Hehe. You know it! 😉
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😀
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Love this, steph!!! ♡ xx
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Thank you, Eric! ❤
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I really like the air of mystery around the story…so many possibilities!
She claims to have never been free, but I suspect that she HAS always been free, but has been waiting for someone to tell her that all her life.
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You know…
I adore that perspective. Adore.
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Love it
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Thank you so much!
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You ever read something that speaks to you in such a way you could imagine it was written for you? No? Just me? Great story.
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Indeed I have.
Indeed you have.
Indeed we have.
Indeed I have run out of indeeds.
Also. Thank you. 🙂
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Indeed Ann Jones and the Temple of doom?
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See.
Now you’ve spoiled it.
WITH LAME.
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Whatever. That was funny.
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This is me, pointing and laughing at you.
Only you can’t see.
Because you’re all the way up fucking there.
Up fucking? Fucking there?
Somefuckingthing.
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Up fucking, down fucking. Whatever direction is fine. Hahaha!
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Upside down fucking?
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Might be difficult because of where the blood would flow, but I’d try it.
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Oh I see.
To the wrong head.
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DING DING DING! Tell her what she’s won!…..
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DING DING DING?, you said?
DONG DONG DONG, was my reply.
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Bwahahahaha! Yeah, was kind of expecting that to be your reaction. At least in your head.
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You seriously expected me to censor?
ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAINED?
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Thank you, Russell.
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Don’t test me.
I’ll throw a phone at your face.
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Don’t push you, ’cause you’re close to the edge? You’re trying not to lose your head?
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It’s like a jungle sometimes. It makes me wonder how I keep from goin under.
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You are such a talented writer! Do you think you would consider doing a post on your top writing tips/advice for new writers?
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Oh my gosh! Me?! Oh my gosh! I don’t even know what to say except I’m super super flattered. I’m totally winging it.
I’ll consider it! 🙂 Thank you!
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Honestly I love your writing
If you wrote a book I would buy it 🙂
I hope to read more of your stories
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I am deeply flattered. This is a high compliment indeed. Thank you so so much!
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